Rigor Mortis [Rigor Mortis Stops my fun Rigor Mortis Broken bones when I'm done] Chorus Your body's cold,but so beautiful You don't move,so I just stare at you Stay with me,for richer for poor So I can touch you,forever more You're hard to move,I break your hips Your body's blue,just like your lips I move my body,with all feeling While your hard face,stares at the ceiling [] Chorus He takes the body,caresses it so The brittle body,heart so slow He feeds it milk through every hole Try's to give it life they stole His new 'lover' needs no skill Just there for primal thrill He's a freak and drinks to vile The psycho life,a necrofile A bit freaky i know,but i hope you like it *edited spelling
It's good, but you made a few spelling mistakes :wth: Otherwise, I liked it... it's not as... taboo as your last one. Keep it up. Edit: Better now with the fixed spelling. Cheers.
Well it's been a while since i've read something from you and you have improved a lot, great job, torn rosed mentioned it wasn't as taboo as your last, so i might have to go check that one out.