korn writing

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    linkinpark_ben25

    linkinpark_ben25 In Your Face!

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    linkinpark_ben25, Aug 10, 2005



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    here is my latest writing, but i think there is something missing to it, seeing as my other two pieces had something added.

    please tell me how i could improve
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

    linkinpark_ben25 In Your Face!

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    linkinpark_ben25, Aug 10, 2005



    sorry about double posting of thread
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

    ChooseYourPoison nymphetamine

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    ChooseYourPoison, Aug 20, 2005



    The edges should be a little jagged. Think of the "Take A Look In The Mirror" cover. ;)
     
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    ~Diamond Feorsteorra~

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    ~Diamond Feorsteorra~, Sep 2, 2005



    ...I can't see this one either....
     
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    LProx4life

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    LProx4life, Sep 2, 2005



    It looks tight to me.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    lp_sk8ergurl, Sep 2, 2005



    It looks ok.
     

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