Hey guys, Basically, what I thought would be cool is this:- I start off by writing a line of poetry/lyrics. Then, another person comes along and writes the next line. Another person writes the next line, and so on, and so on. I'm interested to see what the community can collectively create. It's easiest if we establish a set pattern from the begginning. Four line verses and a traditional rhyming pattern should be easy enough. Okay, here we go (i'll edit my post and add your lines to make it clearer.):- Yesterday she said goodbye to me, I cut her throat desperately, And as I held her in my arms, i felt her cool, final breath blow over me, the hidden satisfaction dawns, it's reborn to to believe And as the torn goddess Lay before my soul I cherish her wayward memory Then I loose control Manuevering my way down the misty lane, I search for the first time for my killed sultry dame, Black clouds have gathered over my head again,
i felt her cool, final breath blow over me, the hidden satisfaction dawns, it's reborn to to believe.
I cherish her wayward memory Then I loose control __________________ Yesterday she said goodbye to me, I cut her throat desperately, And as I held her in my arms, I cut her throat desperatly And as I held her in my arms i felt her cool, final breath blow over me, the hidden satisfaction dawns, it's reborn to to believe And as the torn goddess Lay before my soul I cherish her wayward memory Then I loose control
Okay, we'll go for five line stanzas instead of four line one's. Damn you freakolp *shakes fist vigorously*
lol... manuevering my way down the misty lane, i search for the first time for my killed sultry dame ------------------------------------------------------------ Yesterday she said goodbye to me, I cut her throat desperately, And as I held her in my arms, I cut her throat desperatly And as I held her in my arms i felt her cool, final breath blow over me, the hidden satisfaction dawns, it's reborn to to believe And as the torn goddess Lay before my soul I cherish her wayward memory Then I loose control manuevering my way down the misty lane, i search for the first time for my killed sultry dame
I think it will be better if everybody writes just one line. But that's only me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Black clouds have gathered over my head again