Hi I am new, and this is the first time I ever tryed to create something, so the name of the song is "creation" or "Things to Say." I just changed some things in the song, and think it's better. If you can't tell what I cahnged, I still need more imput, thanks. "Creation" or "Things to Say" I got things to say, that I must let out The song’s of accomplishment is an astonishment that created a void in time, it was a crime The ally (Trying to wake you in my mind, trying to create a void in time) Trying to break me, It began to wake you Trying to create me, It created you What did you think had happened? That you created me? No, It created you As I get ready for this day to begin I remember the times us ally’s had as friends The distress put upon me is a forgery, This pen cannot get rid of this tortur’y The significant mastery of the un forgetfulness sorcery It had me confused, un amused, and the times withdrew Forever I was stumped about the past of my mind Was I right or was I wrong? (Maybe a bit too long) The song’s of accomplishment is an astonishment that created a void in time, it was a crime Things to say, and things to do, it doesn’t really matter about you The ally (Trying to wake you in my mind, trying to create a void in time) Trying to break me, It began to wake you Trying to create me, It created you What did you think had happened? You created me? No, It created you As I get ready for this day to end I realized that I had created the biggest sin To take what has not been presented to me I took what had not been given to me To create what only god has given Trying to hold on eventually Is a time I regret in my soul And to give back the time that I had stole I was Tortured that the toughness had disappeared, and won’t reappear Till the day that I repent these sins, the anger begins Burning deep inside is this anger I cannot deny, Is The ally (Trying to wake you in my mind, trying to create a void in time) Trying to break me, It began to wake you Trying to create me, It created you What did you think had happened? You created me? No, It created you The ally (Trying to wake you in my mind, trying to create a void in time) Trying to break me, It began to wake you Trying to create me, It created you What did you think had happened? You created me? No, no, no It created you
Ok, thanks. I like the rap's, but I am always going over this and rewriting, and changing thing's. I find this really fun.