I’ll touch you there, you don’t like it Leave your drink, and I’ll spike it Your coming home with me tonight With, or without a fight? That doesn’t matter anyway Once your in, your here to stay This isn’t rape!(kind of said to himself) My love is agape You are NOT my prey (said to himself again) Love won’t lead me astray I stumble and fumble I gotta calm down, gotta slow down, or I’ll fall down That’s it ,it’s called mating So excited I’m coruscating You want it too, So just say you do I want to drop my guilt Or this love I’ve built Will die This isn’t rape!(kind of said to himself) My love is agape You are NOT my prey (said to himself again) Love won’t lead me astray I act the way I see fit I know you love me, just say it(an excuse for him raping her) Try and enjoy this It’s gonna be bliss Do not fear Heaven is near (orgasm for the man) I’ve finished now I wipe my brow You’ll be locked up Until my next buck (until he wants sex next) Just say you want me And I’ll let you go free Just say you want me. And I’ll let you go........free (drowning out in sobs/screams)
umm nice...i guess... sounds like something Trent Reznor would have written during the Downward Spiral period, similar to Closer.
Woah, very intence write. Good job, i never reallly expected anyone to write about what you just did but, i guess someone now has. Great job.
thanks david. i was thinking sbout my writing,and i realised that i kept my writing to pretty much one topic,i wanted to chage that.So i'm gonna start writing weird songs
*bites lip* oh thats a bit nice isnt it? or maybe I'm just odd.. I dont know. I find that really hot. A little ..sadistic. well done. i love it..
ha, I think that guys got a bit of a thing for you! This song reminds me of something I heard the other day, I've just (finally) bought The Subliminal Verses by Slipknot... AH! Its like the virus of life, sick yet very well written I think, Yours is more blantant .. Yeah ive already said all this really havent i? Sorry I just really do like this song. xx