Exorcism of Religion Pt.2-A follow up to Pt.1

Exorcism of Religion Pt.2

I feel you there
Your looking through my stare
Run through my shell
Take me to hell

Exorcise me in the streets
So that I may go and preach
You hold no lies
You stop demise

[I’m a stargazer
Evil in a shirt and blazer
The strength of man won’t get me through
A stronger thing I need, its you] Chorus

Taken from this the world I knew
and given something fresh and new
Your a valentine
Gave me killing time. Yes- follow with chorus in the same sentence

[]Chorus


I’ve been saved
A holy path for me is laid
A servant to you I now am
I am the stronger man

 

A great fallow up to the damn good Part 1. Haha keep it up.

 

wow, outstanding, will there be a part 3?


keep it up

 

thanks guys

 

I'd like to read part three (if there is one).

 

i might write one,i dunno

 

very nice, do you have music set to it yet?

 

nope,not yet

 

i should say, the very few exquisite words make the poem very very strong though it is not all that long...lenght dosen't matter for poets like you, and that is a really tough sect of poetry...perhaps the highest. the fact that you can rhyme and make immense noble meaning out of just a few words is amazing....




i'm really far from that...i'm an addict to longer lines....

 

wow,thats the most complicated comment i've ever had

But i like it,thanks dude