Heya evry1, these r a few poems i have written, Im not sure if i put them up using my old user (JessaBomb) or not so i decided 2 do it again wif my new1. ENJOY "Sarah" My name is Sarah I am but three, My eyes are swollen . I cannot see, I must be stupid I must be bad, What else could have made My daddy so mad? I wish I were better I wish I weren't ugly, Then maybe my mommy Would still want to hug me. I can't speak at all I can't do a wrong Or else I'm locked up All the day long. When I awake I'm all alone The house is dark My folks aren't home When my mommy does come I'll try and be nice, So maybe I'll get just One whipping tonight. Don't make a sound! I just heard a car My daddy is back From Charlie's Bar. I hear him curse My name he calls I press myself Against the wall I try and hide From his evil eyes I'm so afraid now I'm starting to cry He finds me weeping He shouts ugly words, He says its my fault That he suffers at work. He slaps me and hits me And yells at me more, I finally get free And I run for the door. He's already locked it And I start to bawl, He takes me and throws me Against the hard wall. I fall to the floor With my bones nearly broken, And my daddy continues With more bad words spoken. "I'm sorry!", I scream But its now much too late His face has been twisted Into unimaginable hate The hurt and the pain Again and again Oh please God, have mercy! Oh please let it end! And he finally stops And heads for the door, While I lay there motionless Sprawled on the floor My name is Sarah And I am but three, Tonight my daddy Murdered me Someone special Too sweet to taste too hot to hold, your mind is like fire your heart like gold, your lips are silky my heart you stole, your words like fire they melt my soul, i love you so dearly dont let me go, your someone special I love you so. Pieces Of Me My heart is like a jigsaw that now has missing pieces, when you walked out that door you took away my heart.. Dont take those pieces away from me bring back the love that used to be, cause i cant let go,now cant you see i need those jigsaw pieces- there apart of me Feelings For every heart that finds love there is a heart that cries, for every dream that is reborn there is a dream that dies, for every day filled with sun there is a day of rain, for every hour filled with joy there is an hour of pain, for every smile upon a face there is a tear to cry, for every found hello you say there is a sad goodbye. Lack Of Love Why dont people see you? They just walk by they dont even stop to speak not even a little smile, why are you invisible? they just walk through you why dont they stop to apologise, they just push and move you why dont people speak to you? they just talk behind your back why dont people understand that your different? they just dont care for they are white and you are black and that is something you shouldnt compare Blood on your Hands These bloody hands are your own, You riped my heart out no longer stone, The pain you caused from this fight, Will haunt me for ever will hold me tight, As I scream for mercey and beg it to stop, The pain still floods as I start 2 drop, I fall to the floor now covered in blood, I relized that your trust was just a dud, It fooled me good it fooled me well, goodbye mother fucker GO TO HELL!! Untitled I wait in the darkness just for you, Your killing my insides belting me black and blue, I was keeping your secrets not telling a soul, Id take them to the grave until I grew old, But you broke my trust just threw it away, Not careing like you did yesterday, So here I am come and get me, The pain i cause in return will cause your fatality.
these poems were quite good. i thought sarah was really good, quite dark and twisted and the ending was pretty sad. it was a really good write! feelings was also good and quite sad to read. can i suggest something though that maybe others might point out too? i think it would be better to just post one poem at a time as a new topic each time and post one up every day so that people don't feel overwhelmed by a large number of poems. that way people are more likey to read your work and your work is well worth reading! oh, and welecome!
nice work overall,but my favourite by far was 'Sarah', possibly the best poem i have read here,its so well written and i didnt really expect that she was gonna die i love that,so awesome. Twisted and sick,but i like poems and songs like that thankyou for putting it on the site
LOL dont mean 2 sounds bitchy or ne thing but i dont really need welcoming, I used 2 have another account on ere (JessaBomb) but for some reason it got banned. I tried going 2 the help section but i couldnt evn get into that! So I just gave up and made a new account. This is it
She's already banned, but I don't think she actually wrote those poems. The "Sarah" poem is one of those chain letters that floats around the internet--I've gotten it at least five times. I can't prove that she didn't write the others, but if she copied one there's the possibility that she copied all of them.
actually, it wouldn't surprise me. i was only trying to be helpful to a 'new' member but i got attitude! but, oh well...