I Wish

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    Feenix

    Feenix Well I Do

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    Wrote this ages ago. I've had a great deal of writer's block lately and so writing new stuff is slow and painful. I hope you enjoy this though...


    I Wish

    Picture perfect sky,
    Reflected in my eye,
    But not inside my soul,
    Just a big black hole,
    As if the sky was grey,
    And you had run away,

    I wish I could go back and do it all again,
    I wish I could change history with this pen,
    I wish the sky would turn from grey to blue,
    I wish I could be here with you,

    I wish I would have tried,
    Instead I sat and cried,
    It'd rain and i'd get cold,
    Forgetting all that i've been told,
    And i'd like to but I can't stay,
    But i'll still come visit you someday,

    I wish I could go back and do it all again,
    I wish I could change history with this pen,
    I wish the sky would turn from grey to blue,
    I wish I could be here with you,

    I wish i'd never lied,
    But i'd hide and keep it all inside,
    I wish this wasn't getting old,
    I just want someone to hold,
    I wish I had someone I could say,
    I love you to each and every day
     
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    Luke

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    Dude good work but you gotta post your stuff in moderations :lol:

    Its just that if you post all your stuff it moves other peoples stuff further down which means less people can see them to read and reply to them ;)
     
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    Feenix

    Feenix Well I Do

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    Yeah I see what you mean. It's cause i've got a back-catalogue of around 200 lyrics which around 100 of which I wanna post. So I wanna space them out, but it's difficult.
     
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    saunderitos

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    dude,awesome yet again,i love your writing

    have you got MSN,if so add me on [email protected] and we can seap songs and talk :)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Impressive.
     
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    Arhaz

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    ^_^ i like it....but i love the way it ended! :lol:
     
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    Messy Marj

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    Sweeeet. It's very good. Well done. :)
     
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    fallenangel

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    i like it! real nice
     

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