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    Luke

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    These lyrics are aciently old,I found them a minute ago so I thought I'd post them here


    Would You

    I have waited for so long
    Counting down the days that you've been gone
    But I know that I must stay strong
    So I sit here playing my song
    The day you left I couldn't beleive my eyes
    You didn't even say goodbye
    And at night when I cried
    I wondered if you even cared

    Would you be there If I needed you?
    My sanity has gone unclue

    Would you help me if I stumble and crawl
    Would you catch me if I fall
    I have waited for you to call
    But waitings in vein and I cannot hold on

    I've tried so hard to move on
    But with you not here I feel so numb
    My mind can't register that you're gone
    I've felt empty inside for way too long
    Are you ever gonna come back to me
    Will be yours who's face I see
    Appearing on a road coming towards me
    Will it be that girl of my dreams

    I'd be there if you needed me
    Come back and set our spirits free

    Would you help me if I stumble and crawl
    Would you catch me if I fall
    I have waited for you to call
    But waitings in vein and I cannot hold on

    Trapped inside
    This cage of love
    Filled with
    Thoughts of us
    I want you here
    Summer breeze
    The smile on your face
    Winter Freeze

    These dreams
    They're everything to me
    Come back
    Set our spirits free

    The dreams
    Are everything to me
    Please come back
    To set our spirits free

    Would you help me if I stumble and crawl
    Would you catch me if I fall
    I have waited for you to call
    But waitings in vein and I cannot hold on

    Would you help me if I stumble and crawl
    Would you catch me if I fall
    I would help you and catch your fall
    Do the same for me because I cannot hold on
     
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    Feenix

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    I love that so much. It's like the sorta song that i've wanted to write for a long time. You know like when you wanna write something, but you can't get the words just right, that's it.
    Beautiful, i'll be sure to look out for your stuff especially.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^

    This was actualy written about 2 years ago when I first started writing lyrics,it was when my girlfriend moved to canada,I lost all contact with her.

    But oh well I've got a much better girlfriend now B)
     
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    Cool man. I'd say keep it up, but by the looks of all your newer stuff you already have :lol:
     
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    Luke

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    :lol:

    Cheers dave ^_^
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Sounds good I like it.
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks ^_^
     

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