The Heavens steal my Love. Closer to my touch, far from my mind, I finally stare into the memories that I had left behind, Here you were, and there too, It seems like I dedicated all my life, to you. Your beautiful emerald eyes look at me again, I see the time when I confessed to you, my love, in the rain. Your stitched lips long to speak, as that time, You catch your breath once more, a beauty sublime. I hold your hand for the hundredth time, since we met, The chill flowing into my living warmth, so hard to forget. Amongst the crowd, I feel so alone with you, If they say that you have gone, I believe that I have too. Hours go by, and you are left with me, The both, unshielded from the cold night, it’s meant to be. I hear your soul sing as it leaves its mortal magnificent abode, The brilliant Chariot of the Heavens wait, after light years they’ve rode. A gleeful wind blows, as upon my head your Divine soul places a farewell kiss, I lose myself from that moment on, waiting for Death, in this merciless bliss. comments please...
This poem is so amazing, everything you write is amzing, soon i wont bother reading them i'll just be like, hmm freakolp, ok we know that's gonna be totally amazing don't even have to read it lol. So unless you start writing worse i'm not going to read your stuff anymore :angry: . LOL, just kiding. Once again, very emotional, great job.