A Beast who loved You. I’m mistaken to be your dread, so cold, My life has been a nightmare, I should have told. Don’t run away yet, feel me breathe, Imagine, for it feels real to me. I’m hollow, but I wish not to be, I’m filled with Love for you to see. Can you hold the desperation in my eyes? Yet, I wonder...who am I joking with all these lies? It’s true that I’m the creature you fear, I’m a web of hate and truths so clear? Why are you afraid when you shall rest in peace? What is greater than living forever- with me? Close your eyes when you want to love me back, Picture me as a prince, when the world’s in black. I am the prince of dreams, so why not here? I am faithfully, you nightmarish prince, my dear. Yes, indeed, I was that very prince, the One, Who reached his love till her every command was done. But humbled am I now, after all that respect and pride, When I see you hiding there, I hear your silent cries. The people about, heartless, feared me, but I cared no less, I’m hurt, as I see you use your tears to soak your dress. My love, I lived these long years for you, To see you pleased, not those ugly beads of dew. Wipe them off now as my anger rises, I feel so much hate, a mental crisis. Say you love me, I fear an outburst, Trust me; my love for you is what I hold first. I’d only wish you would waste away loving me, instead of crying, I couldn’t contain it longer, and now you’re dying. Forgive me, my love and Love itself, I cried within my soul, for years with no care, no help. These fangs have grown out of years of exile, I loved my princess, for her I conquered every mile. And as the Evil Forces had promised, they’ve done their deed, As I murdered my love, beside her, at last, I bleed. :'( it's very long, but i hope you guys like it!
Man that makes me even more sad then I already am. But it is good. You did a wonderful job on this one. <3
wow, just brilliant, you are an amazing writer. I really felt sorry for the person in the poem. Just a great job at getting the reader to feel how you want them to, that is an amazing tallent, never stop writing.