Yeah. This probably sucks because I just finished it and I haven't had time to go over it and make sure it's okay. It's general song writing format...verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus...etc... Here it goes: You're crossing all your fingers Just hoping for the best outcome You're staring at the figures Just wondering what the best one was And out of all your problems You'd do without the little ones Forgetting what's important You don't know when you've had enough Chorus: But you've come a long way You've come all this way It takes a lot of loss to change I wish that part could be erased You're crossing out the losses Pretending that it could be worse And while the truth is messy You can't avoid it anymore You have your better moments But issues weigh a little more You've had your disappointments But never like this shit before Chorus You tell yourself it can't just stay like this You can't throw yourself away like this You know you shouldn't be afraid to miss You know there's always a way out... Chorus
I must agree, a very catchy little piece that i think would work well with the right music Keep writing.
Thank you both. The catchiness was the general plan. It works well with the music I put to it, thanks for reading!