Ten years in making Hands are shaking It’s been a long hard road to go Ten years in making I can’t be faking This feeling cannot be described with simple words Ten years in progress I never saw this Coming faster than the light Ten years in progress In my conscience I feel I knew it all the time Before my eyes Ten years I saw And there are ten more years to go Before I know myself As well as you know me Of my own life Ten years I saw And there is so much more to go But now I know that truth Has never been in me Ten years of guessing Life is passing In a second all is gone Ten years of guessing And repressing All the things I wish I’ve never said and done Ten years I’m crying Without trying It was all within my hands Ten years I’m crying My soul is dying Just to get at least chance to make amends Before my eyes Ten years I saw And there are ten more years to go Before I know myself As well as you know me Of my own life Ten years I saw And there is so much more to go But now I know that truth Has never been in me You know me better than I ever knew myself
Nice work, i found this poem very interesting and different. I liked the way you set it out with repeating the first line in the 4th. It worked well in this poem. Good job, keep it up.