Well this is a very short poem as i wrote it and then it didn't fit with the rest of my new poem i'm writting, but i quite like it so i thought i'd just leave it as a short poem. <div align=center>Born Born for death, born for pain, Born so we could all die in vain, Born to love, born to hate, So many choices lead to one fate, (Death)</div> LOL, just realise i wrote pem instead of poem.
this is good david! it's nice to see that other's are trying to experiment with different lengths of poems too cause it's not just the long ones that are good! me likey and it would be nice to see you write some more shorter ones in the future!
LOL, i wasn't expecting a comment that strong, but when you as great as me what else can you expect. LOL . Thanks everyone for your comments. We'll see, short isn't usually my thing, but now i've written one it may become easier. Thanks once again.
Not too bad at all David, personally I would have probably liked it longer. More time to go into detail and be creative. But either way, I still like it.