we are the nothing -edited for thosewhowanted more

Distort my voice[slow]
Make it noise
Dont listen to what we say[speed up]
You know better anyway

[chorus]Put-Your-Trust-In-Lies-And-Sci-ence
[Yes]-We-Are-The-Last-De-fiance
And-If-i-was--dis-crete
i-[would be]-obselete [said without the breath inbetween the words]

Kill the guy whos a liability
Cover it up with your lie-ability
Dont you listen to what we say
We dont matter anyway

[chorus]

Smash us with your ironfist(Listen)
In your body well be a cyst(system)
We'll poison you until you die
until that point,noone is fine

[chorus twice-screamed second time]

You SUCK!!!!!
Thats all there is to it.
Thats not they way!!!
Your gonna get through it
All you'll get is hate and scorn
Your side,My thorn

Change that cut to a laceration
No more deceitfull explanation,cut







tell me what you think of the edits,ill change it back if you reckon it sucks,ill start it again

 

It's better.

 

thanks

 

I like it, has a very rough tone to it, very angry.
I think the edits are pretty good overall.



P.S. You said well instead of we'll. Just something little, i'm not trying to point out your every mistake, so don't take offence.

 

none taken

I'm glad you like it more than the original.

Ill sort that typo out when i get home ^^(im at school)