ive put the demo up,ive added some more,i want to have some pointers before i try and finish it Civilization A mind ablation* Disintegrate Those who cant wait- For you to fall Lie on the ground and call- for help from the normal kids mongoloids and flids Ashes to Ashes Dust to Dust Society You have no right to me! I won’t give you what you desire Because of that, my minds on fire There’s nothing wrong with me I’m fine I absorb all colours But won’t shine Ashes to Ashes Dust to Dust *An ablation is the surgical removal of an organ or part |
This kinda reminds me of a blend between Trivium-Declaration and Metallica-The Memory Remains Good work though
I must say i liked this better than your last, but this one is much simpler. Is this going to be a song? cause if it is, it seems a bit short. But yer, pretty good, keep it up.
yes it will be a song,i though i'd put up a demo and see what people think of it thanks for the comments guys