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    Luke

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    Life is like a disaster novel
    Chaos seems to be everywhere you turn
    And the people who care just dissapear
    So kids have no one to help them learn
    Society is to blame for what's fucked up
    Beggars on the streets askin' for some change
    Its the system that's kept them there
    Its the system that's all to blame

    And at night when you look to the skies
    The stars and moon shine in your eyes
    This triggers a message to you're mind
    To finally realise that this could be your time

    (chorus)
    Fuck this machine running on gold
    Controlled by those who's souls are sold
    I wasn't born to just sit and listen
    So fuck you and fuck your system

    Life can be fucking hard for osme
    But to them its like a dream
    They sit around and do waht the hell they want
    While ignoring the children scream
    Simply deaf to the sound of rifles
    But using it in their speech
    Hoping we take it in like fools
    So they can get more seats

    But today could be our time to shine
    As millions que in one line
    Ask forgivness of the sins of mankind
    But its your fate,only you can decide

    (chorus)
    Fuck this machine running on gold
    Controlled by those who's souls are sold
    I wasn't born to just sit and listen
    So fuck you and fuck your system

    Why do we just do nothing?
    Why do we fill their greed?
    Don't we have any rights at all?
    Do we have no responsability?
    Well tonight I take a stand
    I reach out and grab the crowds hand
    We throw them into the mosh pits
    So they can feel the pain of kicks and fists

    (chorus)
    Fuck this machine running on gold
    Controlled by those who's souls are sold
    I wasn't born to just sit and listen
    So fuck you and your system

    Where is your system now?
    Fuck you!
     
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    Luke

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    As whats probably gonan be my final post (and ironicly a double post) I'd really like some feedback on this.Thanks alot for everyone's support :) .
     
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    Joe

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    I like it. The chorus is my favourite part and the verses have some solid lines too. Very powerfull stuff. Good job. :thumbsup:
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Got to say it's long and good.
     
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    Awesome work :)
     
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    Luke

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    Thanks for the comments :)
     

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