Spring melts, the sun glazeing and opening the hearts of many, where that specail girl down the street, goes outside and greets you, happily, as if she had a great warm crush. She walks up, and asks for a date standing in the great warm sensation you agree. As you smile, she comes up and gives you a little kiss. The sun, beating on her skin The loveing warmth that has sprung at you a twist of luck and faith has heated the friendship. Summer heats up, the sun shining the plants grow ever so beautiful and her face, evolving, changing. You grow attached and love her she feels the warmth, the person loveing her so much. You send her flowers, seasonal flowers she undyingly loves you more feeling abit down, you try to please her, with your warmth she is content, her heart, warm with joy. She goes on a vacation, and with a picture of you, that she wont forget. Fall breeze, a array of colors a celebration to feast an arrival expected, you wait patiently. As you feast the celebration as you wait for her arrival you look around anxciously for her appearance you try to have a good feast. But there is a cut silence. the fall breeze blows though the opening, and two torn papers come across to your sight it is your picture. You look around and though the colors of Fall, you spot her, with another person. she walks up to you crying, she gives you one last kiss and a note as you start to open it, the feast continues, and you start to have tears, reading it, you start to cry the winds blow and so does the warmth you had in your heart, turns cold. the night casts a cloud of rain and snow you being to think, and drift into memories. Winter winds blow thought the valley snow, is a blanket of frost comfort, at your house and bed happiness, in every ones heart she the special one so far distant as long as you keep touch as long as you talk rerember the times that you and her had a "moments" save it and savor the moments as presious time as it only happens once that the first kiss is the best and the last kiss sadding like the cold Winter winds blowing past your face saying good-bye Comments anyone? EDIT: the first segment was winter, the rest i decided to add on.
nice array of words added, erm..... to make it better you could possibly add a few sentences in between the sentences, that would split up the seasons. nice work