If you try and you fail Don’t up give so fast There’s still so much to count on You can stand up And easily change your fate And find the strength to carry on There’s a life to be seen By the eyes that are still So weak and blind When I’m crying and dying It’s all in me When I’m breaking I’m taking It out of me When I come to the end I don’t look behind I start it all again Don’t you know There is always a second try There is still another chance It’s never really The right time to say goodbye Though you think your life is a waste There’s a life to be seen By the eyes that are still So weak and blind So much more I could be So much more I could see Lying blind behind all of the time this is not all from me So much more I could feel So much things that are real There’s a life to be seen by my eyes that are still so weak and blind
wow! now this was good! it was nice and optimstic which is really good to see. i love this one! did you write this for someone or just for yourself, cause it's kinda like your telling someone not to stop trying. this has a real nice message to it. i think it's a fav! well done!
You've got a good theme going but I just didn't catch on to the flow of the song.Good effort though .