My Silent Contradiction. Isn’t it just easy to let me do what you say? You’d feel the same, if I had it my way. I can’t agree yet I’m forced to do these things, I blame you for all the dejection that my life brings. You’re a soul opener, searching my inside, And I’m like the bare truth, searching for a place to hide. I don’t believe what you want me to, But I’ll remain a silent contradiction for you. Alone in this world, I think I shall remain to be, I hate you; love you, you alone to see. Can’t speech out what my heart needs, I unaccompanied, mourn for my peace. Neither does the trickling rain bother to consider, Nor the empty sky, for all I am under a dictator. Voices of a person beam and read aloud my fate, I have no say, my life’s been told till my final date. Everyone notices, but lends a blind eye, People can see, but they just prefer to lie. Nobody to teach me how to be free, I am against everything that you lay for me. But quietly, I let go of all these thoughts, Wondering about the worst after all we’ve fought. Knowing that sacrifices are made by those who care, They let go if it all, and eventually no one seems to care. I force myself against this global mob, I treasure the seas and it’s every drop, A contradiction to the world and to you too, Yet I’ll remain a silent contradiction for you. i hate it.... :wth: but what the hell?! comments please!
why do you hate it? i think it's good! it's quite a long one but the rhythm kept the momentum going so it flowed real nice. i don't know about you, but i think this is fab like most of your works. good work and i hope to see you post more stuff soon!
thanks a lot people. i hate it because it was really hard for me to stick to the topic, and i couldn't flow well...i usually write what's random in my mind, so it feels releavent, but this one just didn't hit hard enough... thanks anyway, guys! you are great!