the day is long

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    I missed my chance and I’m feeling so sorry
    Looking behind everything is so blurry
    I only want you to show me your love again

    I was so wrong could you ever forgive me
    I truly regret would you only believe me
    I only need you to show me your love again
    To give me another chance

    I was so wrong
    But the day is long
    Would you let me show you
    That I’m not afraid of love

    The things that I’ve said
    The moves that I’ve made
    I’m not afraid
    Would you let me show you
    That I’m not afraid of love

    I was so weak and so hesitant
    Some things about me will never change
    I only want you to know that I feel the same

    The things that I said only made you feel worse
    It wasn’t in purpose I must’ve been cursed
    I only need you to know that I feel the same
    Give me another chance
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Alright ,I liked it .
     
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    fallenangel

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    this reminds me of something that happened to me a while a back...

    this is really sweet (maybe not what you want to hear!) but this is a compliment!

    i really love this one! it has a real nice flow to it and i can feel the emotion you must have put into this poem.

    it's fab! well done, it really moved me.
     
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    El Muerto

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    once again autobiographic song. all my songs are.
    i'm glad you liked it
     

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