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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    El Muerto, Jun 10, 2005



    Try

    Here goes nothing
    Heart is jumping
    I have never felt this way
    Till you my darling
    Caught me smiling
    And what I did, I looked away
    The walls are crumbling
    Storm is rumbling
    In my head I see it all
    And wonder what’s it gonna be
    I guess I’ll never know if I don’t
    Try

    Avalanche
    Is getting closer
    But I’m not gonna run this time
    I’m sick of always
    Being loser
    I learned my lesson right this time
    I had a question
    Found the answer
    In my head I see it all
    And smile knowing that what I know
    I’d never know if I didn’t want to
    Try
     
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    hybrid_fan

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    hybrid_fan, Jun 10, 2005



    I like it very much.
    good job!
     
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    fallenangel

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    fallenangel, Jun 11, 2005



    the rhythm in this one was really good!

    me likey alot! :D
     
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    Darcy

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    Darcy, Jun 14, 2005



    Hmm, I really like this one a lot. It was very enjoyable to read.

    That is my favorite part.

    The whole thing is great, though. It flows nicely.
     
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    El Muerto

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    El Muerto, Jul 4, 2005



    thanks guys
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    lp_sk8ergurl, Jul 5, 2005



    Good...good...good.
     
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    saunderitos

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    saunderitos, Jul 5, 2005



    i normally find it hard to read songs without ryhmes(typo?) unless they have music with them.But this was very easy

    good job (w00t) :ninja:
     

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