a demo write up

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    saunderitos

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    saunderitos, Jul 3, 2005



    a small demo i wrote ,in about five minutes


    Civilization
    A mind ablation
    Disintergrate
    Those who cant wait-
    For you to fall
    Lie on the ground and call-
    for help from the normal kids
    mongoloids and flids

    Ashes to Ashes
    Dust to Dust
    Nothing can hinder
    Your power lust
     
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    saunderitos

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    saunderitos, Jul 3, 2005



    anyone ? :unsure:



    :mike: :chaz: :joe: :brad: :phoenix: :rob:
     
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    Heavy is the Louis

    Heavy is the Louis No really, we are so back. LPA Team

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    Heavy is the Louis, Jul 3, 2005



    It's okay. A bit short, but it's not bad.

    And don't double-post. People will respond. Have patience.
     
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    saunderitos, Jul 3, 2005



    thanks,its short cause its a demo :)
     
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    Rinkin

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    Rinkin, Jul 3, 2005



    It sounds like it's written for a black metal type song. It's cool. Nice job.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl, Jul 4, 2005



    Good stuff you got there.
     
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    saunderitos

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    saunderitos, Jul 4, 2005



    thanks guys
     
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    this is quite good! put some more work into it and i think it would be great!
     
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    thanks dude/dudette :D
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    a life in ashes, Jul 4, 2005



    yeah try and extend this and it could be very good.
     
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    El Muerto

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    El Muerto, Jul 4, 2005



    what he said
     
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    saunderitos, Jul 5, 2005



    thanks for your comments everyone,ill write the extended version up on here when i finish it
     

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