Fucked It All

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    This is my re-written version of Wonderwall.

    Fucked It All

    Today is gonna be the day,
    That I'll finish bleeding for you,
    By now you should've somehow,
    Realized what you put me through,
    I don't believe that anybody (Fuck You),
    Feels the way I do about you now (Piece of shit),

    Backbeat the word was on the street,
    That all my veins are dry,
    I'm know you've hurt me before,
    But you didn't need to shout,
    I don't believe that anybody (Fuck You),
    Feels the way I do about you now (Piece of shit),

    And everyday I'm on the floor and screaming,
    And everyday I can't believe I'm breathing,
    There are many things that I would like to say to you
    I don't know how (without killing you),

    Because maybe
    You're gonna be the one who breaks me?
    And after all
    You've fucked it all,

    Today was gonna be the day
    But I'll never stop being hurt by you,
    By now you should've somehow
    Realized what I go through,
    I don't believe that anybody (Fuck You),
    Feels the way I do about you now (Piece of shit),

    And everyday I'm on the floor and screaming,
    And everyday I can't believe I'm breathing,
    There are many things that I would like to say to you
    I don't know how (without killing you),

    Because maybe
    You're gonna be the one who breaks me?
    And after all
    You've fucked it all,

    Because maybe
    You're gonna be the one who breaks me?
    And after all
    You've fucked it all,

    Said maybe
    You're gonna be the one that breaks me,
    You're gonna be the one that breaks me,
    You're gonna be the one that breaks me.


    thoughts please...
     
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    Luke

    Luke Mind Your Manners. LPA Addicted VIP

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    Sorry but you simply cannot re-write a legendary song and turn it into something that has alot of cursing etc. in it.It was a good idea but it has not worked well here at all.Sorry.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Got to agree.
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    yeah i know, this wasn't a recent thing i did, i wrote when i broke up with my last girlfriend, and this song was kinda "our song" if you like, so hence the re-written version. but yeah you're right looking back on it, it is pretty crap. meh, hopefully the next one will be better.
     

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