It’s All Gone Away

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    It’s All Gone Away

    Tried so hard to free myself,
    But it’s all been burnt today,
    Sickness consumes all I do,
    So I hurt myself again,
    Everyday you push me further,
    Everyone has their own piece to say,
    Feel the glare of the sun,
    And it’s all gone away,

    Everyday hurt a little more,
    With each one I made a deeper cut,
    Every moment you broke me further,
    I couldn’t save myself,
    But now I look at my reflection,
    And I’ve left it all behind,
    You’ll never bring me down again,
    Never again will I hide,

    Started out with nothing,
    I’ve still got a little left,
    Increase the dosage make it lethal,
    Destroy my rotten core,
    So many times I consider running,
    And never looking back,
    So fragile I never made a stand,
    But that’s all changed today,

    Everyday hurt a little more,
    With each one I made a deeper cut,
    Every moment you broke me further,
    I couldn’t save myself,
    But now I look at my reflection,
    And I’ve left it all behind,
    You’ll never bring me down again,
    Never again will I hide.



    thoughts please...
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    i think this is my fav from you!

    the flow was really smooth and i could feel your pain that you are conveying.

    loving it!

    really liked this bit! ;)
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    thanks, new work is currently under construction ;)
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    I really like it, another great piece of work, i must agree with fallenangel that
    is my favourite part to. Can't wait to see what you do to it since it is still "under construction". Nice work. ;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    This piece was well done.
     
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    Friskey™

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    Nice job.
     

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