Notice: For those confused about why I'm writing lyrics about a vampire,the vampire is a metaphor for war. You live for bloodshed You love seeing tears Your pleasure is invoking Lost childhood fears When the sky is black It’s the time when you strike Hearing the screams of agony Is only to what you like You’ve existed for all time And yet you never leave Why do you linger here? Haven’t you taken the lives you need? But you always return For more blood to take You’re remorseless but now I see It’s for someone else’s sake Your dark sense of moral Is apparently ok Just as long as you strike In a certain way You’re only taking orders But does that make it right? That you can kill whoever, how many you want And turn the day to night The chilling sounds you make Are heard from miles away It’s only what’s more haunting Than you’re evil, vampiric ways Despite your massacre There are some who still survive But all of which afterwards Are deathly traumatised And we call them heroes For surviving your onslaught But volunteering to fight Means their integrity was bought And soon you’ll strike again Much worse then before Thoughts of not being massacred Are all we can hope for Your dark sense of moral Is apparently ok Just as long as you strike In a certain way You’re only taking orders But does that make it right? That you can kill whoever, how many you want And turn the day to night I just ask why Why do you exist? I scream this to the world While clenching my fist I hope for an end To your unjust cause But for now I sit in silence Because there’s nothing I can do to stop it (Nothing anyone can do) Your dark sense of moral Is apparently ok Just as long as you strike In a certain way You’re only taking orders But does that make it right? That you can kill whoever, how many you want And turn the day to night The blood is on your hands Fuck you and your sense of wrong and right Your time is at hand So prepare for your last fight
i really like it! very clever cause i could imagine what you are trying to get across and the message that you are conveying is very clear. well done, this is good work!
Wow, this is very good. And I like you using "vampire" as a metaphor for "war". Fits very well. But one thing that I disliked was that it seemed some of the rhyming was forced. That part for instance. But nevertheless, it was still very well written and I think it was really good.