Eighteen Visions of You

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    Eighteen Visions of You

    Eighteen visions of you,
    Eighteen visions of pain,
    Eighteen ways to suffer,
    Eighteen parts that just don't fit,

    You never really understood,
    What it feels like to be me,
    Watching life slip away,
    Just like dust it feels the same,
    It makes no sense,
    To burn me here,

    Eighteen visions of you,
    I've seen eighteen visions of you,
    And nothing seems to fit,
    It's broken,

    I'm not sure why I'm cold,
    Feelings are confused by our disease,
    Wretchedness is only me,
    I like the wish you make,
    That the pieces will be numb,
    And so I'm happy,

    Eighteen visions of you,
    I've seen eighteen visions of you,
    And nothing seems to fit,
    It's broken,

    Broken,
    And nothing seems to fit,
    Torment,
    Just like everything else,
    Sick,
    Of our perpetual disease,
    Happy,
    With what I never got,

    Eighteen visions of you,
    Eighteen visions of pain,
    Eighteen ways to suffer,
    Eighteen parts that just don't fit,

    Eighteen visions of you,
    I've seen eighteen visions of you,
    And nothing seems to fit,
    It's broken.


    thoughts please...
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    The first sentences sound great.
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    this is rly gd. i really like it. keep going...
     
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    bleeding rose

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    Really good stuff keep it up :D
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

    D_A_V_I_D Pure Pwnage

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    Nice work, i really like this, the whole thing is great but these lines were just superb.
    I just love em. Great job, keep it up.
     
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    Christopher

    Christopher Über Member Über Member

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    Coowl lyrics, can't wait to read more of your stuff
     

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