Voyager An arc of darkness, and I regret it, Far lying happiness and I can’t get it. The world had turned against me, I’m lacking these opportunities, For every eye stares at me the same, I feel the same insanity. I can’t feel love or anxiety, I’m not worried, I know I’m empty. I stare back at the black blank walls, I’m not confined, yet my freedom crawls. Understanding this hate till I live today, Conviction fails, I’ll find no way. A possession of a shadow, Searching wild for any lamp that glows, But burnt out are each, lacking trust, Losing hope, they die in rotting rust. But I’ll be the lone voyager on my way, I have no shelter for today. I search no path, I’m not lost, I survive in all the warmth and frost, I need neither food nor water to survive, I don’t fear my shadow and cry, I walk endlessly till life burns out, I die on this journey, a voyager in doubt.
Nice work, i really, really like this one. It was really good. i don't know what to say about it, i could find no flaw. Great work.
oooh, i really like this one, in fact, i love it! it flowed really nicely and i loved this contraction in this line... great thinking behind this! these poems of your are so dammed good! don't ever stop!
thanks a lot for your comments David and fallenangel... and yeh, fallenangel, i would really like to know your name, please...
certainly, my friend. let me introduce myself...my name is jenny (well jennifer but my friends call me jenny!)