it can't be good...but i was really missing some writing...been sometime...and i'm back with something new that needs your comments! Don’t want to be back. When I’ll get away somewhere, Somehow, I’ll be gone, And you’ll be down right there, Screaming for me to come home. But now it’s the time that I release All this hypnotic pain, It’s time for your torture to cease, I’m not going insane. And I can’t help the suffocation, Killing my mind as slow, As the time of contemplation Has come, and I’m all ready to go. But soon you’ll pull me back, With all those smiles and lies, Soon I’ll be in your shack, The shack where all my peace dies. Please don’t humble my escape, I need some time to me, Don’t give me those eyes of horrid gape, In a moment I’ll be going to me.
pretty good, not your best but still pretty darn good! i actually really really like this bit! can't wait to read more from you soon, your work has gotten so good lately!