how will i do it today show them the visual representation of my pain by taking a little white pill so white and pure that in enough quantity can be deadly and sour how about the knife that is so big and so clumsy but the blood, oh yes, now that would show them how about a razor blade that is so small and sharp that used right can be easy to twist into my flesh blood can flow freely showing them the pain in all it's glory the wonder and splender of the torture flowing out of me flowing fast and running clear on the ground now that will show them the pain when i am found now i know this may very well crash and burn but i am trying still to get through my writers block...
Does everyone around here have writers block? Great work. Not one of your best but better than the shit i was churning out when i had writers block. It is different and i like the idea and i still think it came out pretty well. also, this sentance doesn't make much sence, u need to reword it a bit, or mabye you accidently left a word out. Anyway, great work, keep it up.
thanks alot for the comment david. yes, that sentence was different orginaly and i changed it last minute so maybe i should have left it as it was!
Wow! Great job. I like this part"show them the visual representation of my pain by taking a little white pill so white and pure".
thanks very much Gluez! glad you liked it! yes, i like that line too. i was one of the first parts i wrote! thanks again!