A prophet and a saviour

here we go, i think my writers block has cleared up. Don't know what people will think of this. It sort of stryed from my original idea but i like how it turned out. Hope other people like it to.

A prophet and a saviour

I’m the Lords final prophet,
Here to shed the light,
On the truths no one wants to hear,
For they only proclaim blight.
But I have eyes to see the truth,
To see through the darkness of the night,
To try find it’s source,
To try and save you from this plight.

Spreading my message,
From pen to paper,
Showing you your world,
From the eyes of your saviour,
Listen to me now,
Listen to my words,
This world is going to end,
Because of the hate humans have caused.

And now you try to kill me,
As human nature works,
Destroy what you don’t understand,
Whether it’s for better or for worse,
Close your eyes, close your mind,
To what you really are,
Hide away, become numb,
You’re the plague that fills the earth.

And in this final hour,
You still will not repent,
In belief that you were never wrong,
That you didn’t cause this mess,
When in reality, you are the source,
Of the darkness and despair,
That swallows you, that swallows your world,
And leaves this planet bare.

So hear my words, hear me now,
Listen to your saviour,
Speak of the apocalypse,
Which will do this earth a favour,
It will kill the plague, kill all you,
And leave the whole earth bare,
But it will undergo a rebirth,
And all will begin again.

And hopefully a coincidence known as man,
Will not come to be,
Because from them spawns evil,
Which my Lord can not let be,
For human life was created,
Not by God but by his twin,
And man is his worst creature,
For he lives off greed and sin

Even though you can’t see it,
Through the smog of your own hate,
This saviour is here to save you,
From yourselves and your fate,
Come to me, have faith
For I’m hear to save,
For in death there is peace,
And in peace the Earth will live again.

 

wow david, that was just amazing!

i think it is safe to say that your writers block has gone, gone, gone!

i am looking at this poem trying to find a piece of it that i like the best but it is no use...it's all fucking fantastic!

you write this poem with great authority which, i think, is safe to say that is very rarely acheived. very well done!

 

Amazing job.

 

Thanks lpsk8ter and fallenangel.

I think so to

Also could you elaborate on what you mean than i wrote this poem with great authority. Thanks to you all.

 

Nice job bud. I'm not sure if your troubles of writers block are all gone. They like to come back and mess with you, I know...but I like it a lot. Very well done.

 

Beautiful.

 

i guess what i mean is that i can feel that you believe in what you wrote, that you belief in humans is shaken. if that makes any sence?

 

crystal clear.

 

WOW! Good job David! keep it up!

 

Thanks Gluez

 

OMG! it's just beautiful!-sister.
me-it's an awesome job David. it's...it's mesmerizing! you are a poetic genius! amazing!