Under the Wings of My Savior

Well since I haven't written anything new for a while, I decided to post the first thing I ever wrote:



It’s so dark outside…
And it’s raining.
These tears are so cold…
But I remain breathing.

It’s so quiet outside…
Yet it’s pouring.
The blood is so red…
But I remain hoping.

It’s so violent in our world…
And it’s growing.
Pain itself is screaming…
“Carry me; protect us under your wings.”

 

Wow, it feels like how you write now but less developped. it's nice. hope you write something new soon.

 

yeah, i agree. it's short and very sweet!

i love your work!

 

Thank you both!

And fallenangel your a good writer too.

 

thank you fall.into.sleep! i haven't been able to write through my writers block yet, so that means sooo much! :hugz:

 

Haha. I was going through some pretty tough writers block. Just keep writing, play with some ideas. You'll get something going and just keep adding to it. That's what I had to do.

 

Short and good.

 

thanks for the advice. i will try it!