Wish This house is not a home, Whilst here I feel alone, The hurt return's with everyday, A downward spiral in everyway, The dirt fills up all my life, Eternal lies and parental strife, I wish this place didn't hurt, I wish you knew how I felt, The hole in my head from your abuse, I defend my soul but it's no use, Fifty thousand tears I've cried, For so many years you've lied, You two kept on with your fights, All the darkness of these sights, I wish this place didn't hurt, I wish you knew how I felt, Dirty filth corrupted now, I should run but I just don't know how, I'm so numb I can't stop this pain, Nothing to lose and nothing to gain, But now I'll stop killing myself over this, I'll take the gun and pray I don't miss, I wish this place didn't hurt, I wish you knew how I felt, But instead with blood I break away, With your blood I break away.
First line = 3 days grace - home But other than that, this is amazing. Great work. Something i think people can identify with. Keep it up.
Pretty good except for what David pointed out and also... Evanescence. But still...good minds think alike? It's not bad at all.