Have You Ever

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Good work. Keep it up.

 

this was pretty good! well done.

can't wait to read more!

 

WOW :hypno:

That was amazing.
AWSOME work.
I really like the rhythm and feel of the song and the rhyming pattern was awsome. i loved it

I love this last part the best. Great piece of work. keep it up.

 

Great job. Don't stop!

 

Cheers. I wrote it in abuot 15 mintues, I didn't really have to think about anything that I put or how I put it..

 

hen you do that you somethimes come out witht he best result.

 

Keep up the good stuff.

 

about a while ago, i was so confused. i could bet that i posted in this thread and then i notice that i had posted in tornrose's "have you ever".


freaky...


but anyway...nice piece there.keep it up! awesome descriptive skills i feel!

 

Yeah I just realised he had a poem called Have You Ever too.

 

Love it.

 

Those are some fine words.

 

hell! this is great !