I wrote this for my band after writing the bass and guitar parts with the singer. I had to write it to the vocal melody of the song, which was challenging but I like how it came out. I got this, I dropped it, let it out, and locked my cage Forgot this along with every smile I couldn’t fake I left it, forget it, I drew it out to light and fade Don’t look back, not like that, it’s not the way to end this break I made it, I saved it, made it less than overrated The problems, I got them guilty by association I faked it, you played it, as I left the smile faded I stepped back and watched that everything was out of place Chorus: I could forget everything that I should have missed It would have been something that was less perfectly fit I’m tired and dragged out over the hits It could have been anything better than this I lit it, I ripped it, tore it down and burned the limits It figures, the past had grown into a smoking image It’s over and over back and forth and we re-live it The ending is bending truth to say we don't regret it
Pretty good. Nice job staying away from the word "pain". I know writing this kind of stuff isn't easy but it turned out pretty good.
Haha, I avoid the word "pain" at all costs. The song is sort of about letting it all go anyway, because I just dont care anymore. If what happened hadnt happened, I wouldnt be the way I am. Everything is a growing experience. But its hard not to regret things... Thats the general message anyway. Its really confusing...
I really like this. The only part of it I'm not fond of is the line: Apart from that it's awesome! Keep up the good work.