Wanna live free. There’s a classic mile left conquered, And another abandoned one to go, I have more to give forever, When I die, a dozen more to show. I believe I’ve done not even half, Of what I expect myself to, But now I realized you’re responsible, Since I was living my life with you. Let go of me now, before I lose it all, I have more battles to fight, much before I fall. Let go of your nasty clutches, set me free at last, I’ll live like a wild eagle, before these shadows are finally cast. I wanna breathe, breathe the fresh liberty, I wanna gift myself to win; I wanna die in true victory. I wanna live… Yeh…I wanna live. I wanna feel the essential worthiness, I wanna feel important for me, I wanna know that I live alone, I wanna know that I live free. I wanna live… Yeh…I wanna live. another new piece awaiting some suggestions...please.
wow! this was breathtaking! i loved it. an emotion i have felt on many occations! this piece show real imagination...Brill!!
Wow! This is amazing!! I agree with anyone who has praise for this, it's bloody amazing! Better than I can ever write , keep it up!
thanks fallenangel, that is one of my favourite lines too! and torn rose, you are mind blowing...too good to describe, you should take more credit! thanks! David, you own writers cove, it's feels great to get compliments from you! thanks! thanks a lot guys! you'll see more of me here!
Thanks, but your pretty good yourself LOL i didn't get to post this before because i was in a rush but what do u mean by a "classic mile"? If it was extremely obvious and i'm just having a blonde moment (no offence to blond people) well tell me anyway but yer.
lol David...i can understand if a lot of people didn't get what "classic mile" actually meant. so here i'm gonna clear the doubt. a classic mile is actually this time period in life that bring so many troubles and so much pain. it's that phase of life that is feared by many poeple. it may involve anything like parental split, or breaking up with your mate and stuff like that. it's like when you begin such a phase you start hating it so much you just wish it was over already. and once you have actually conquered it, you feel this sense of satisfaction that you are finally clear of any problems. but the person here dosen't feel content after overcoming that mile because he is sure that there is a never ending stretch of similar miles left. and yet he is proud of successfully getting done with that one mile, because now his life is one mile short and he has a fewer classic miles to conquer. hope you got the point! and thanks for asking!