Haunting Memories

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    Haunting memories.

    And the picture stares at me.
    It’s been frozen in for long,
    My vision inside reminding me,
    Of al those things that went wrong.
    A scar here, a broken heat there,
    Things never seemed so cursed;
    The picture reminds me of pure despair,
    After growing anger had suddenly burst.

    Chorus.
    A memory stuck away in my mind,
    Killing me as I’m killing my time,
    Broken promises, mistrusted love and peace,
    Times of misery never seem to cease.

    Tears of anguish flowing with pain,
    Cold hands wrapping around me,
    Each moment seems to drive me insane,
    I’m running away from where I’m meant to be.

    A ruined memory does this to me,
    It sends to sleep my consciousness,
    It prevents me to breathe,
    And I’m forced into nauseating weariness.



    your comments please!! ^_^
     
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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    wow! you have seemed to improve immensly! got to admite that some of your past work wasn't exactly mind blowing but you must have gained something lately cause your recent work is just amazing!

    this one is fab (just like the last one) and my fav part was...

    damm...the whole thing is my fav part! :lol:

    fab work and whatever you have now, please don't let go of it cause your becoming a great writter!

    you rule! ;)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    It kind of reminds me of something but anyways you did a good job on it.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    thanks a lot fallenangel! you rule as well! ^_^
    and lpsk8er, temme, temme, what it reminds you of, please!
    i'd really like to know if it relates to you life in any way...

    thanks guys! ^_^
     

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