angel on my shoulder

mmm...i am not sure whether to leave this as it is or to add some more. any comments would be most helpful! thank you!

angel on my shoulder

there is an angel on my shoulder but a devil in my heart
there is a conflicting feeling that i only seem to have
everyone wants me to be one way and i want to be another
the thing inside me wants to be the opposite
the battle inside rages on between the bad and the good
the devil is exciting to me and the angel is a bore
i want to be dangerous and i want that more
the punishment is so damm alluring
and the scars are so compelling

 

I think you should add more stuff to it , but it's looking good.

 

Well, it looks more like a bunch of thoughts to me, but it isnt bad at all!! great writing, and you know i always say this: as long as you feel comfortable with it and you say what needs to be said, then it's ok. way to go!

 

yeah, i think i may rework it alittle and add some more stuff.

thanks all for the comments.