I'm You

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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    I’m You.


    Don’t protest to this feeling,
    This feeling that has held you closed,
    Submit to that hiding face,
    Accept defeat that it proposed.

    Don’t alter you state of mind,
    You’ll only fail to do so,
    Don’t try to run away from me,
    You’d meet your final blow.

    Chorus-
    I protect you, I harm you,
    I am your very self,
    I am your greatest enemy,
    Your only source of help.

    Can you hear me knocking?
    Will you answer the door to me?
    Or will you shut me outside?
    In the cold, I’m not here to be.

    I live in the cozy corner of troubles,
    Right in the center of your mind,
    Behold me, the strength that kills,
    I am you, you’re very kind.

    Chorus-
    I protect you, I harm you,
    I am your very self,
    I am your greatest enemy,
    Your only source of help.

    Feel me as I crawl about you,
    Feel me, when I’m within you.
    And when you feel that lasting pain,
    Know that it’s only me in you.

    I haunt you loneliness,
    I was always there for you,
    You are afraid of me,
    Scared of what I’ll put you into.


    do tell me what you think of it... ^_^
     
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    linkinpark_ben25

    linkinpark_ben25 In Your Face!

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    its good,

    but what music is it, rock, pop?
     
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    Muri

    Muri It never ends.

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    ^_^ Mm. It's kinda different. I really like it. Good job.
     
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    army_skater101

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    100%
    awesome. great discriptiveness!
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    I was pretty good.
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    involves metal....a lot and lot of screaming...

    thanks guys....this wasn't my best though. the flow wasn't good enough, it was very very random. wrote it in about 10 to 15 minutes. nothing really of a masterpiece, but thanks a lot anyway! ^_^
     
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    meteoricgirl_kelly

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    i love it
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    thanks kelly!...yeh! and nice sig! ^_^
     
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    Glue

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    Wow. Nice work dude. Keep it up. :D
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    jeez...thanks, man! ^_^
     

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