Hurt

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    hey all, this is my first effort in awhile reviews would be appreciated.

    Hurt

    The weight of the world,
    Held on my shoulders,
    The wounds of time,
    Thorns inside my heart,
    Fossilised in the hole,

    The pressure’s rising,
    My soul’s the epicentre,
    There’s no-one left,
    Who understands me,

    It’s agony,
    It’s torture,
    Now I’m feeling hurt,

    I’m nervous,
    I’m scarred,
    When I’m feeling hurt,

    These bitter little skins,
    I keep trying to shed,
    On the floor of memory,
    I’m at the front again,
    Crawling like the dead,

    The heat’s rising,
    We’re about to faint,
    You could have it all,
    But I make me hurt,

    It’s agony,
    It’s torture,
    Now I’m feeling hurt,

    I’m nervous,
    I’m scarred,
    When I’m feeling hurt,

    Now I’m feeling hurt,
    When I’m feeling hurt,
    When I’m fucking hurt,
    All because of you,

    Now I’m feeling hurt,
    When I’m feeling hurt,
    When I’m fucking hurt,
    All because of you.



    thoughts please...
     
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    CloserToCrawling

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    It's a little repetitive, but overall nice. :)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good.
     
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    fallenangel

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    this bit totally rocks!!! love it!
     
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    hybrid_fan

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    this is really good
     

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