Brutal magnificence embraces you with its decadence You devote yourself to a king, majesty of wickedness Drowning in malice and cruelty, sinking below into this abyss Spiraling, tunneling towards the chasm, the pit Where demons greedily lick the fingers of their prey For one taste of the salt that lingers in the blood Malicious tongues speak in screams and yelps… Pleased at the cries that escape from your slit throat. Descending the stairs to the outer realm… The shadows devour, your soul is bleeding Christ is your savior, your savior is bleeding Save your messiah, your belief is bleeding I sit on the holy throne Casting stones at the creator… Why do not you weep… Your design is failing. Do I dare speak of the evil that lurks around the corner… Threatening the cornerstone of every religion. And the sour smells that reek of tired breath. I sit here under the influence of this fever… This natural high of anxiety and un-pleasantries. Trying to keep my mind off not knowing. Rotten corpses lie, decorating the halls… Skulls and bones garnish the dimly lit dining room… Laugher erupts from the casket in the south… As the chill sliding down your spine plays it’s role as the ice in your wine. Rouses does the angel of death, mercy he forsakes Hide in the depths of your safest blanket, the day he awakes. I inherit the fragility of this body… And all emotion as an accessory to it. So, sadly, in words I could never honestly describe… The evolution that is descending. The only word’s I have left to say… Your design is failing, Rotting and molding under the rough waters of the sea...
this is most definetly the best one from you that i have ever read!!! it's very discriptive and bloody and....can't think of anything else cause this simply just rules! god, you must be extremly talented near to the point of insanty! (not that i am calling you insane!) don't ever stop writing this amazing stuff!
this is what hapened when you take time to sit work on your poem, it is really excellent! Easily the best you have ever written, hat off to you.
*gasp* This is the only other song I've cried to while reading! It's amazing, especially this part: You are so talented! *goes off to search for other poems of yours* Btw, fallenanglel your avtar is wicked!
@fallenangel - Thank you very much, this is definately a lot more dark than deep. I'm very happy you like it this much! @sickcycle - That means quite a lot to me, for the fact that you are a very talented writer yourself. Thank you. @Razan - Thank you also! If your wanting to read something of mine, similar to this one, I'd recommend "Satan Geht die Masse". Ha, and yeah fallenangels avatar is pretty fucking cool.