in this life of love and pain i find a place of essence and in this essence that must never wain i find some common sence this common sence is chereished above all on broken silver wings these wings are the reason i fall and don't see many things but the few things i know i've seen will never come to pass and never show the colors they've been but maybe there the last... but though o wish so hard to find everything to see, i wish to find these pictures inside my mind to be granted of every wish please rate. this is a more recently written poem then the others i've posted. i've been working on it over the week or so.
gotta say, this is most definetly the best i have seen from you yet! this one was so good, the descriptivness was breathtaking! fab work and i hope to see more of this quality work from you!
thanks. this one is a recent poem i've done. i;m getting back into it. i used to write all the time but i kind of stopped. the others i've had on here were old ones. just to get myself out there.