Come In Houston

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    Dedicated

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    "Come In Houston"

    (Come in Houston...)
    We've got a problem we can't decipher,
    A murderer without meaning or just a cipher,
    Another fucking kid that's misunderstood,
    Shot up his family just 'cause he could,

    (Come in Houston...)
    Where do you want me to go?
    (Come in Houston...)
    I just need to know,
    (Come in Houston...)
    No living; they're all just dead,
    (Come in Houston...)
    I never knew people bled.

    (Come in Houston...)
    We've got a life that could have been so good,
    Killed his family and blamed it on Shai Hulud,
    Just another kid that's misunderstood,
    But hates the smell of blood.

    (Come in Houston...)
    Where do you want me to go?
    (Come in Houston...)
    I just need to know,
    (Come in Houston...)
    No living; they're all just dead,
    (Come in Houston...)
    I never knew people bled.

    (Come in Houston...)
    I am dressed up to the nines,
    And you know we're not all Einsteins,
    So we'll never know why people do this,
    And we'll never know why they don't miss...

    (Come in Houston...)
    Where do you want me to go?
    (Come in Houston...)
    I just need to know,
    (Come in Houston...)
    No living; they're all just dead,
    (Come in Houston...)
    I never knew people bled.
     
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    fallenangel

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    i really like this one by you aswell! it's pretty damm good! look forward to reading more in the near future. ^_^
     
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    Il inno di morte

    Il inno di morte A noi si schiude il ciel...

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    Hey, this is wicked! It was pretty cool, and you're right. we can't really get inside someone's mind and see what she/he is thinking. It was a really deep and powerful poem. way to go!!
     
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    Thank you for the comments :)
     
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    Luke

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    Dave this is fucking awesome,I like the repitition in the song which is taknig a gamble because sometimes repetition doesn't work well but in this it does,great job well done man :)
     
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    Good job.
     
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    Thanks for the comments :)
     

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