Answer your toy. I feel nothing right now, Just a pinch of pain, And now you see it rising, I can feel it reach my brain. I feel this reckless hatred, Felt so often before, I’ve held this feeling sacred, Ever since you walked out the door. CHORUS Answer me, you lied to me, I knew it from the start, I was to be your petty play, Until I was torn apart. You nurtured the falsehood, You let the pain find its place, And here I am, where you stood, Questions slapping your face. I feel caught in a clumsy choke Of all the crimes committed, I’m vulnerable to this wayward hoax, Till I feel submitted. I’m holding anger my closest friend, Now that I’m betrayed, I’ll hold on to it till the day you end, And I’m left an angry stray. CHORUS Answer me, you lied to me, I knew it from the start, I was to be your petty play, Until I was torn apart. You nurtured the falsehood, You let the pain find its place, And here I am, where you stood, Questions slapping your face. C’mon, tell me why you’ve returned? Why did you even leave? Am I a toy meant to be spurned? Dying to your relief? Why do these questions confuse you now? Why can’t you answer me straight? Look at me in the eye; answer Whom do you really hate? i need some suggestions please!!! atleast this time... :wth:
this is actually quite good! i like the way you have compared yourself to a toy, little more original i think... i don't think you need to chage any of it cause it's good as it stands! good job.
Yer, very nice. And i do agree, original. The chorus is my favourite part but the whole thing is awsome. Keep it up. PS and yay that Writer's cove is growing...when i came here only like 5 people ever did anything but now we are gettin more and more writers.