I Want To

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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    I Want To

    What is it that I’m living for,
    I don’t think I’ll breathe anymore,
    Is life this bad or is just me,
    Push my fingers into my eyes so I don’t see,
    All the things that break my heart,

    I want to bleed,
    I want to scream,
    I want to die,
    I want to…

    Kinda feel like I’m okay,
    Satisfied I’ve got my way,
    I’ve killed the life in my heart,
    And now I stay in the dark,
    So I can feel this hate,

    I want to bleed,
    I want to scream,
    I want to die,
    I want to…

    I want to…
    I want to…
    Bleed,
    I want to…
    I want to…
    Scream,
    I want to…
    I want to…
    Die,

    I want to bleed,
    I want to scream,
    I want to die,
    I want to…

    My life is a joke to you,
    Stopped being happy and bled right through,
    I won’t let me control my soul,
    My head is like a hole,
    And now I’ve reached the bottom,

    I want to bleed,
    I want to scream,
    I want to die,
    I want to.

    thoughts please...
     
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    Linja

    Linja Good. Be magnanimous. Über Member

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    This is pretty good, I like it...I feel bad about the lack of posts from me now...I've not had internet cuz 've been moving...I've written more poems though so expect them up in the next few days..and btw again, really liked the poem... :p
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    thanks
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    Ok, you've done well.
     
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    army_skater101

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    nice. i like how you leace it hanging at the end of the chorus with "i want to..."
     

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