the walking wounded or the gift

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    fallenangel

    fallenangel Well-Known Member

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    in this present i am driven by anger
    that was given to me by my abusers
    i want to show them all the cuts that bore down so deeply
    all the pain that is still there that they all gave me
    was there something in me that was so repulsive?
    or just something that their black little hearts couldn't stand so they tried to ruin it
    all i wanted was to be left alone, to be ignored
    but they couldn't do that cause i seemed to be an easy target

    i am the walking wounded and their gift to me was anger


    i haven't finished this one yet but i would like to know if it seems to be any good... :mellow:
     
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    arT saveS

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    I like it so far, especially the last line. I hope you keep adding to this. :)
     
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    fallenangel

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    thanks very much. will try to complete it soon but can't rush creativity... ;)
     

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