Dark secrets shadowing burden… Burning holes that enflame my hate… Will you share my pain, please… I’m afraid this is the end my dear I’ve been troubled too much to hold on… Guilty of nothing but affection and optimism Decaying heart bleeds away… Weakness overcomes sanity… It is everything, and I bow to it… I worship it For no emotion has such impact… No feeling can cause this… So strong it inspires me And it speaks to me, calling my name It beckons me to follow Pleading that I will give up No defense against this monster All of it ends, No escaping fear. New title: Rising of Trepidation woo hoo spicy enough?
Tis good, but the title is a little bland, might I make a suggestion, go with something a little more spicy, maybe, "Fear That Beckons" "Enchanting Fear" [both suck, but you know what I mean]
I really like your stuff, it's awesome!!! . I've noticed you kind of prefer short poems, which is fantastic, cuz I really admire the fact that you say so much with just a few words.. way to go!!!
Thanks all. @Sparkling Diamond: I've written longer stuff, I actually prefer my longer stuff, more time to go into detail. Kinda like a poem I will be posting later named "The Casket in the South". It's a lot longer, more dark than deep. But usually I post stuff right after I've written it, and I need to stop posting so many at a time. Anyways, thank you.