Can't Take You

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Monatori, May 16, 2005.

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    Monatori

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    Monatori, May 16, 2005



    This is one of the songs that is going to be on Monatori's first album. I hope you like it. These are only the temporary lyrics, there is still some work to be done.

     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, May 16, 2005



    Who?

    EDIT: LMFAO I get it you naughty boy.

    actually i don't but fuck it wheee
     
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    Monatori

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    Monatori, May 16, 2005



    My band. If you go to my introduction topic, I describe a little about it. XP
     
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    Friskey™, May 16, 2005



    Shouldn't this be in Writer's Cove?
     
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    Monatori

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    Monatori, May 16, 2005



    Yes, I accidentally put it here. XD So if a mod could please move it?
     
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    fallenangel, May 16, 2005



    this is pretty good! can't wait to hear the final version! ^_^
     
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    arT saveS, May 16, 2005



    Was you listening to Linkin Park when you wrote this? There's a lot of lines that seem copied. Aside from that, it reminds me of a slightly better version of a bunch of linkin park songs with bigger words and more meaning.
     
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    Monatori

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    Monatori, May 19, 2005



    No.. I wasn't listening to LP... I can't listen to music and write at the same time... >.< I didn't know that it sounded like it was from Lp o_O;; It wasn't meant to be. Though, I do write rapping/singing/screaming songs like Linkin park. That is my style, just like them. XP Anyway, me and my band have decided to get rid of this song, unless more and more people like it... so I guess I just have to wait and see. ^^;
     

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