Ashes

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    arT saveS

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    Can you breathe?
    Or are you suffocating…
    On the lies…
    You’ve been spewing.
    Infectious corruption…
    Circling and spinning
    Crashing down upon us…

    Everything will fall down
    Pain in the cracks…
    Society crumbling…
    Ashes…
    Ashes…
    We all fall down.

    Burning screams of…
    Terror that rips my soul…
    Visions of hatred…
    They smother me…
    Forced control
    Dizzy and broken

    Sickness erupting…
    Contagious disease…
    Feeding on the weak
    Suffocating…
    And choking…
    Can you breathe?

    We watch these ashes…
    Fall down
    Beautiful burning ashes…
    Fall down
    Oh graceful ashes…
    We all fall down.
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

    lp_sk8ergurl Well-Known Member

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    Good work.
     
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    a life in ashes

    a life in ashes mercury summer

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    awesome...
     
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    fallenangel

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    this was good but not my fav cause you've written better. but still pretty damm good! ^_^
     
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    arT saveS

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    Thank you everyone. :)

    @fallenangel: I like your avatar, I don't know if it's new or not, but I just saw it.
     
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    fallenangel

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    yes it's new. just put it up!

    glad you like it! ;)
     

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