i haven't written in alittle while cause i've been sitting exams. pretty hard to be creative when you've to be logical! so this might not be that great as i am getting back into the swing of things. so any comments are welcome. i'll stand by you bruises and all the pain that is felt isn't that bad when i fall it's alright you say it's ment to be like this love is suppost to hurt if you go away, you'll be missed so i'll stand by you even thought i can't stand it so the world belives your ok the pains not too bad, it's only a prick i'll be just fine cause i know he loves me the pains alright, the bruises will heal it will be ok, just you wait and see
nice... i like it...a song/poem that isn't depressing that isn't really cheesy... good work keep it up!